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lakerzz8
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So I don't know if any of you heard the site associatedcontent, but I got my story published on there so if you could check it out and tell me what you think, I'd appreciate it.

http://www.associatedcontent.com/articl ... tml?cat=44
My stories:Story 1
Story 2

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'My' story? It seems you had a bad day..... :laugh:

Pretty good.
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Santhosh CHRiS
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Post by Santhosh CHRiS »

Nice story and really realistic... like it could happen to anyone.

Love your style too. It uses simple direct narration of what's happening instead of complicating it with trivial descriptions and details.

Overall very good. Make hard copies of all your stories sometime... so I can read it in the bathroom and stuff.

I finished half the entire Lord of the Rings Trilogy in there once lol
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so I can read it in the bathroom and stuff.

Is that where you take your pictures of lakerzz8 too?
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Thanks for the comments everyone, except yours DB :P
My stories:Story 1
Story 2

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Post by Santhosh CHRiS »

lakerzz8 wrote:Thanks for the comments everyone, except yours DB :P
Ha ha ha ha... OWNED!!! :D
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