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lakerzz8
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dosraider
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Location: ROTFLMAO in Belgium.
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'My' story? It seems you had a bad day..... 
Pretty good. |
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Santhosh CHRiS
Way too much free time
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Location: India
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Nice story and really realistic... like it could happen to anyone.
Love your style too. It uses simple direct narration of what's happening instead of complicating it with trivial descriptions and details.
Overall very good. Make hard copies of all your stories sometime... so I can read it in the bathroom and stuff.
I finished half the entire Lord of the Rings Trilogy in there once lol |
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Dogbreath
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Location: In the back of a jacked-up Ford.
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so I can read it in the bathroom and stuff.
Is that where you take your pictures of lakerzz8 too? |
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lakerzz8
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Location: L.A., California
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Thanks for the comments everyone, except yours DB  |
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Santhosh CHRiS
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| Posted: Mon Jun 15, 2009 10:23 am
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| lakerzz8 wrote: | | Thanks for the comments everyone, except yours DB |
Ha ha ha ha... OWNED!!!  |
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