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lakerzz8
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 1:14 am     Post subject: My Story Reply with quote

So I don't know if any of you heard the site associatedcontent, but I got my story published on there so if you could check it out and tell me what you think, I'd appreciate it.

http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/1822153/walking_to_work_on_a_stormy_day.html?cat=44
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dosraider
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 5:37 am     Post subject: Reply with quote

'My' story? It seems you had a bad day..... Laughing

Pretty good.
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Santhosh CHRiS
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 10:27 am     Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice story and really realistic... like it could happen to anyone.

Love your style too. It uses simple direct narration of what's happening instead of complicating it with trivial descriptions and details.

Overall very good. Make hard copies of all your stories sometime... so I can read it in the bathroom and stuff.

I finished half the entire Lord of the Rings Trilogy in there once lol
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Dogbreath
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 12:06 am     Post subject: Reply with quote

so I can read it in the bathroom and stuff.

Is that where you take your pictures of lakerzz8 too?
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lakerzz8
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 4:19 pm     Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for the comments everyone, except yours DB Tbbbbbth!
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Santhosh CHRiS
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 15, 2009 10:23 am     Post subject: Reply with quote

lakerzz8 wrote:
Thanks for the comments everyone, except yours DB Tbbbbbth!


Ha ha ha ha... OWNED!!! Shit-Eating Grin
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