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Dogbreath Admin

 Joined: 14 Sep 2002 Posts: 4328 Location: In the back of a jacked-up Ford.
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Posted: Tue Dec 10, 2002 6:15 pm
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webmaster from hell Guest
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Posted: Tue Dec 10, 2002 10:53 pm
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Found this neat poem on gwthons....
In The House of Holy Names
The warm comfort of belonging
The wind at your back
spirits you along
And if you ever face the wind
You are cradled in belonging
The streets are hard and
littered with the detritus
of the façade
Altars to mediocrity crowd the
shopping malls and plazas,
giving purpose to meaningless
work
Behold the sleeping giant
Upon this stage you present
Yourself
Reciting the familiar lines
to demonstrate your mastery
Something old is nothing new,
yet the audience applauds its
similarity
The fantasy of wealth and
comfort, ubiquitous throughout
humanity
is herein what is celebrated,
yet the homogeneity of fashion,
architecture, and form is all
that is ever perpetuated
In the recesses and in silence
Visions of myriad complexity,
swirling galaxies of activity
and the hum of electricity
Eyes bright with curiosity,
bristling with the thrill of
invention
Measuring days by discovery,
yet every day is lonely
You do not look for what is new
and different
You do not appreciate what is
unadorned and essential
Mystified by that greatness
which has gone before
Knowing that there is One who
looks upon you and approves
or disapproves
Your mind is closed behind a
stained glass door
In the house of holy names
copyright 1999 by Merl Hampton
http://www.seekermagazine.com/v0399/poems.html |
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Oz Way too much free time

 Joined: 15 Sep 2002 Posts: 585 Location: London, UK.
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Posted: Thu Dec 12, 2002 6:25 pm
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| if that was short, then i don't wanna read what you'd call a long poem. |
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Thunderdog Token Black Guy

 Joined: 14 Sep 2002 Posts: 1735 Location: North Carolina
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Posted: Tue Dec 24, 2002 8:28 pm
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As I walk outside to feel the warm St.Croix breeze,
My father, behind me, Cuts the cheese.
I turned around, and wrinkled my nose in disgust.
While he threw at me, a bucket which contained Rust.
In response to that, I threw at him, a cat.
As a counter to that, he busted a cap.
I clutched my chest, giving me the flurries,
Whilst my dad was currently, Furry.
This is what I call Family fun,
Some others may call it a Family which has too many guns.
o_O;;; (I made that one up in approx. 3 minutes ) |
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webmaster from hell Guest
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Posted: Thu Dec 26, 2002 1:29 am
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| THAT made NO friggen sense at all. And what is that friggin avater you so friggely display for a friggen avatar? Tell me what the frig ya doin with that friggen thing. |
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Thunderdog Token Black Guy

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Posted: Thu Dec 26, 2002 2:23 pm
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Obviously you've never played Starcraft.....
And at least I didnt write a "Short" poem thats over 50 Damned Lines long! |
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Dogbreath Admin

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Posted: Thu Dec 26, 2002 5:44 pm
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| I thought Thunderdog poem was very creative and made perfect sense, it made me laugh after reading it. `'Twas 10 times better then the one you stole from Merl Hampton, Mr. Ilovecallingthekettleblack. |
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Da_Goat Moderator

 Joined: 14 Sep 2002 Posts: 2042 Location: Prescott, Arizona, USA, Earth, The Milky Way, The Universe, Nothing and Nowhere.
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Posted: Thu Dec 26, 2002 9:16 pm
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I liked it too, though I never related it to Starcraft. Just the fun me and my pop have  |
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webmaster from hell Guest
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Posted: Fri Dec 27, 2002 1:31 am
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| i did not steal it. It sez at the bottom the credits....you better read be4 you talk nonsense. |
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Dogbreath Admin

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Posted: Fri Dec 27, 2002 3:09 pm
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| Talk nonsense? This from someone who can't even write his own poem and "t4lkz le1k t1hs"? You better think before you insult me again. |
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Oz Way too much free time

 Joined: 15 Sep 2002 Posts: 585 Location: London, UK.
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Posted: Sat Jan 04, 2003 4:36 pm
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hey! HEY! calm down dogbreath! let ME take care of this little, disgusting, vile, neglected, lowlife, ****ed-up piecea****! don't dirty your hands!
*pulls out a razor wire*
*WFH starts runnin*
*Oz runs faster*
*WFH runs int an alley. Oz follows.*
*screams*
*more screams*
*pool of blood flows from alley*
*Oz walks out, with a maniacal smile on his face...* |
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Thunderdog Token Black Guy

 Joined: 14 Sep 2002 Posts: 1735 Location: North Carolina
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Posted: Sat Jan 04, 2003 8:39 pm
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When I go to the mall
I feel kinda small
Seeing all those scarey people
makes me want to give a call
These lyrics - really - suck.
Not like you give - a big - duck.
When I suck on some Halls (c)
I bang my head on walls
Seeing all those scarey people
makes me want to give a call
Sing sing sing sing
Sing sing sing sing
Sing sing sing sing
Sing sing sing sing
- Singing lacey (Dark corner, an MZX showcase by draconic creations) |
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GAMER Gaming Demi-god

 Joined: 22 Sep 2002 Posts: 1393 Location: chasing chikeds in the snow!
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Posted: Wed Jan 29, 2003 3:33 am
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A narrow tunnel,
No light at the end,
Noone to guide me,
not one single friend.
no1 is here,
there's no sorce of light,
but i need sum1 to hold me,
when i'm in a fright.
where is my prince?
da_goat is smelly, (edited today.)
my hopes are running out,
damn those syllabellies. (ditto.)
by....
bumbadumdum......
ME!!!
GAMER.
Last edited by GAMER on Wed Jan 29, 2003 6:05 pm; edited 1 time in total |
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Da_Goat Moderator

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Posted: Wed Jan 29, 2003 10:34 am
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that was alright.....
| Quote: | | for me he can rescue. | That was way too forced. Also, you need to shorten the syllables in the last line. Perhaps take out the 'very'? Also, 'rescue' barely rhymes with 'few'. Should change that. |
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GAMER Gaming Demi-god

 Joined: 22 Sep 2002 Posts: 1393 Location: chasing chikeds in the snow!
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Posted: Wed Jan 29, 2003 6:33 pm
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no offense. j/ks.
GAMER. |
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